Review for Chosen

Chosen

(#) MarkPoa 2006-04-14 08:20:07 AM

I found that as a one-joke offering... it's at least effective as a short. I was honestly expecting something longer with the description of a "Mary Sue parody". But, I thought the fact that she had a sword and gem ready on hand was pretty fun. Could probably use a bit of a funnier line at the end, but the one there now is adequate.

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