Review for Strictly Business

Strictly Business

(#) kira_k 2006-12-27 02:22:27 PM

Hi,

I found Cloud's characterisation a bit shakey (Why would he attack Reno when Reno is only smoking a cigarette without attacking him first?) but overall the story was very good.

I loved the ending, and I loved how you portreyed their getting together, how Cloud became a bit... in love with? addicted to? Reno. Thank you for writing it!

Author's response

Well, because Reno was still under orders to search for Cloud.

I know, the entire story is a little shaky, but thank you for reviewing it and you kind words. And you're welcome :) haha

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