Review for Strictly Business
I found Cloud's characterisation a bit shakey (Why would he attack Reno when Reno is only smoking a cigarette without attacking him first?) but overall the story was very good.
I loved the ending, and I loved how you portreyed their getting together, how Cloud became a bit... in love with? addicted to? Reno. Thank you for writing it!
I know, the entire story is a little shaky, but thank you for reviewing it and you kind words. And you're welcome :) haha
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