The opening letter is so powerful, it’s uncanny. Love the musing on the number (and word) “seven”. I am more than excited to learn what happened. Good job.
This is SO worth continuing. Make chicken salad every day if it helps your plot development but don’t you stop!
Looks like you have a fairly big cast (all of her family). But maybe that’s just in the beginning to set the mood and all. Probably. Big character casts are always scary to me (as a writer) but I guess I’m still going to try working with it in the Curls. Yes, I can ramble too. ;)
I love this. It’s on my alerts and favorites already.
Author's response
yea the family isn't going to play a huge roll over the entire story, but they will be significant during certain parts.
Molly's parents relationship esspecially. but that's all your getting for right now. bwahahaha.
and yay! I made a favorites list and an alert list. sweet.