Review for Loser

Loser

(#) locust 2006-04-17 09:51:07 AM

I have mixed feelings about this. I'd give it a nice try, BUT, rating. The humor is part of the way there, but you really need to be more of an asshole to all the characters to really bring it off. Good humor needs the mentality of a giggling barracuda.

Author's response

Do you mean that Matt should have been more of an asshole or that his coworkers should have? I was skeptical about putting this in the humor section. It's more of a general with moments of levity.

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