i wrote this while reading. now mind you, it was written at about 1:00 this morning after a 9 hour drive, so if it doesn't make sense it's prolly not suppose to.
1.) I love how patrick wasn't completely unselfish- very realistic. i think i was referring to One question still remained. How was he going to convince her to stay? - i think i meant to say it's refreshing that he isn't completely focused on that one aspect of what the revelation meant.
2.) the foreshadowing is perfect: She knew it was ridiculous to think that he could stop Kiefer if he were to show up, but she couldn't help but feel safe around Patrick.
and that's all i have to say about that. except that i have a million rating points, and i totally want you to have two of them.
that, and i miss you. my life isn't complete without the nice spice.
Author's response
I have to respond by saying that there is a void in my life without my strange spice. That's right. I'm claiming you as my own. Hope you don't mind.
Thanks for the wonderful review as always. You are the best cheerleader a drama-rama writer like myself could have. SMOOCHES!