Oh. My. God. This was so freaking original!!! I feel really bad saying this, but...incest is hot. And, this story made me cry. But in a good way. Urgh. I loved this. Please write more.
Author's response
aha. that's okay, don't tell anyone but, the other day when i re-read it ... i kinda started feeling a little 'sad' myself, so you're not alone. a lot of people have told me they cried as well. aha, yeah well, you only think it's hot, i wrote about it, so i think i'll go to hell before you :P. thanks for the review, glad you like my shit.