Review for Low-Cal Diet
"Underbelly" is one word, but dark and plastic? Unique.
Do you mean "tapped" or "taped" to her mirror?
I think "fatass" is one word too.
"Its" does not need an apostrophe.
Hmmm... Where to post this indeed. Have you considered Horror? A few foreshadowy tweaks to the earlier portion and it would fit right in. If I were you, I'd allude to the idea that the woman's eating habits kept her body well-padded, but not say what those habits were. This isn't a humor piece, really, though the quirky last line would close it off nicely.
Just a quick frerard I wrote for my friends birthday (oneshot)
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