Review for A Play
What exactly is a "regular party"? And if this is ever to be performed, you won't want anyone to have to read out that "A" is a hitman. You must either show us that he is or somehow work it into the dialogue.
Well THAT was different. Maybe when Luella has her soliloquy, you should allude to her hooking up with a no-goodnik.
You know what might spiff this up? Formal playwrighting format. InuKag uses it here: http://www.ficwad.com/viewstory.php?sid=12083
FRERARD. ONE-SHOT. "Because he knows it's Gerard, now."
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