Very sweet chapter, and quite nice, as hurt/comfort goes. I think most Faramir fans agree that the dear man needed lots of hugs at this point. Whether he would have accepted them is up for debate.
""I tried to please you, father, truly! My loyal men, all fallen! Boromir, my beloved brother, no!" " - This seemed a bit unrealistic; even in as a flood of grief from a man thinking he was alone and no one could hear him. I would have preferred a different expression of Faramir's grief for his father, brother, and the men lost under his command.
Still, a touching chapter.