Review for Cancer


(#) kero5566 2007-01-07

I really liked this story, it was thought provoking and realistic. The idea that it could happen to anyone from anywhere in the world is moving and intense. Perhaps you could have tried to space the story out more, into smaller chunks rather than one long paragraph.

Author's response

Thanks for the tip! I have alot more of these stories to post and will make sure i keep that in mind! Thankyou!