Review for Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?

Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?

(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-08

Patrick telling Molly to grow up is slightly ironic.

I loved the creating of suspense that was brought about by not telling the reader right away what objects Molly took. Ok, maybe it was kinda obvious for a person with a brain. Anways, I felt the suspense. :)

Ambiance.

Author's response

yea. I was writing that and I said to myself "what would his reaction be? he's 16 and male. Ok he'd be not understanding and pissed off."
And yea, I tried to create suspense glad I managed it.