Review for Parallels

Parallels

(#) MeLaiya 2006-04-23 08:34:02 PM

oh man that was absolutely beautiful. I cant believe how well you portrayed the characters and their feelings. This was heartfelt, deep and to me very emotional. I love your work, keep it up and update soon.

Author's response

Thank you! The only thing I don't particularly like is how random the sex scene is >.< I did not transition it well enoug :/ but I'm glad you liked it :D

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