FicWad

If you were going for parody or strictly laughs, this may have made it. If it was just supposed to be humorous, then I feel it fell flat. It is so OOC that I felt it was not X-Files at all. There may have been glimpses in the show, but they were few and far between, which was just enough to add a little humanity to the characters. I cannot imagine this conversation actually taking place within the confines of the broadcast series.

This is okay on dialogue, but there is nothing to counter balance it. You are only telling us things and showing us nothing. It lacks substance. I believe if you were to fill in the gaps, it may improve the overall acceptance of the story.

Thank you for sharing.