Review for To Fight the Coming Darkness
To Fight the Coming Darkness
(#) spqr1060 2006-04-24 07:36:53 PM
wanted to tell you how much i enjoyed the chapter.. love the build up between susan and ginny and am finding the pace of your writing just right.. but THE best thing was penelope, just a little more narcissa like coldness when percy cottoned on would have been exquisite.. i applaud you good sir!
Author's response
If I ever go back to do rewrites, the Percy/Penny/Voldy scene is probably the most likely to get a rewrite.
Jim
Jim
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