"why charles you do keep in shape!," .. oh you legend! narcissa's little whirlwind in the will reading session is fantastic.. i am very interested in writing a tense will reading scene of my own that doesn't pull many punches and you have given a lot to mull over.. well done again
Author's response
Yeah that is one of my favoirite lines from the story. Good luck on your story. The one thing that I got called on by reviewers on other sites was that Harry should have been more angry with Narcissa because Kreacher ran to the Malfoys with his information.
Jim