Review for Irresistible Force

Irresistible Force

(#) dogbertcarroll 2007-01-11 08:30:21 AM

Although I have a hard time believing
Naru could mistake the Juggernaut for
anything but a massive wall of flesh, I
really liked the way it turned out.

Author's response

Keep in mind Keitaro was submerged underwater to his neck, and Naru was glasses-less. She dipped her hand underwater to feel his chest up, and the steam prevented her from seeing the size difference between him and Kitsune.

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