Review for The Mistake

The Mistake

(#) luckysgc921 2007-01-12

uhh...Ava needs to start putting 2 and 2 together to get 4. Matthew was holding her phone..and then her phone was on silent. dun dun dun. He's very against her being with Patrick. I think he wants her. I think she needs to kick him to the curb, best friends boyfriend or not he's getting a little creepy.
great chapter though. yup yup. I loves it.

Author's response

hm, yes, Ava probably IS a little dumb when it comes to boys... glad you like it!