Review for Goblin Conspiracy

Goblin Conspiracy

(#) DarkeGray 2007-01-13

Good chapter, I felt it was a little bit rushed, you could of spread it out through at least 2 chapters, add in some more context, more of Harry's training and preperations but still it was good, I also would of liked the final battle to be a little bit longer too, also you could of invited Harry's friends too. One other thing, are you planning to hook Harry up with anyone? You seem to be leaning toward Hermione with the way they act but Ginny still seems to be in the picture. Anyways, can't wait to see how it ends and how Dumbledore takes not being involved with the downfall of Voldemort, it will be a huge blow to his pride for everyone to find out not only did Dumbledore have nothing to do with it, but that he was more of a hinderence than help.