Review for The Mistake

The Mistake

(#) riaryder 2007-01-14

Uh, hello? Earth to Ava! That Matthew is a bad 'un.
Great chapter, twisty turny, suspenseful and intriguing.
Can't wait to find out what's next. Have a point, lady.

Author's response

Ooo... Thank you for the lovely point. I shall cherish it always...