Review for Not Looking

Not Looking

(#) MMMramen 2007-01-15

I can't believe I almost missed this update. I'm sooo sorry. This chapter brought me to tears. I really thought Patrick would go after her, spill tons of romantic sentiments and there would be make up sex. Instead...I got Pete going after Olivia and Patrick cheating with some unsuspecting girl. But life isn't perfect and I like how this story reflects that. Not everyone gets a verbally inclined Prince on a white horse. This truly was a moving chapter. An I will rate it as such. Miss you, babe. xoxoxoxo