Jim, another excellent chapter. I did find this one little bobble: Its grieving and everyone keeps telling me I need to be doing it more. should be It's called grieving and everyone keeps telling me I need to be doing it more.
I don't need to tell you how hard it is to find any 'bobbles' in your writing as you have the proof of it in my reviews. Keep up the excellent work and I'm off to read the reading of the Potter will aka the next chapter.