Review for Fairy Tale Ending
Fairy Tale Ending
(#) MarkPoa 2006-04-30 06:08:11 AM
I like the concept and message of this poem. It's just a feeling but, based on the message, I think this can be made longer, stronger... more emotional, I guess. It's okay as it stands now, but you may want to go back to this and extend it. The poem can only get better. :)
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and yet i keep thinking about this! i will revisit the idea...
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