Review for Numb Again

Numb Again

(#) MarkPoa 2006-04-30 06:21:00 AM

I liked the tone and tempo you've set here, but it still needs some editing work. In particular, the line "Numb to every motion" had me wondering if it should be "emotion" instead.

Author's response

no... it is supposed to be motion.

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