Heeh. That was neat.
Honestly, her lineage was written all over the place, but the buildup was great. Now, i remember my wife's pregnancies, and she ran a bit short on thoughts sometimes, but Hermy is not that far along. She should have seen the writing on the wall earlier. Possibly creating instant Denial, but still. Now i eagerly await her meltdown over carrying a beautiful Greasy Gitspawn.
No, not really.
fires up the flamethrower
The story lacks something. I think it's grit'n'gore. Some kids should have been maimed, missing a limb or eye or something. The messages and bears and whatnot touched my heart, but there's no reason for you to settle for that. You are good enough to take my heart in your hand and squeeze the rhythm you want. I've seen it.
puts the torch away
The introduction of the "historical" Snape raised an eyebrow. That could mean both things. Cool!
I can't wait for FutureBabe to wake up!
You'll be reading from me.
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