Review for Escape
Well damn, thats a hell'uva way to begin a story. I liked it. Now it has me guessing who they are, and why "they" started shooting at Meg. So many question but I think you'll do an excellent job explaining that in later chapters. Plus I think you have a great sense of urgency in action with your narrative.
sorry, but it was just a random oneshot!! i'm not very good at doing the longer stories, they tend to drag on and get boring.
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