Review for Black Vengeance - 1

Black Vengeance - 1

(#) Sch1av0na 2007-01-25

Interesting start to this story. I can see how this could start to change a lot of views among most of the DA members if they train and get to know Theodore and Daphne.

As far as ships go, I'd like to see it be Harry/Hermione or Harry/Daphne much more than Cho. While she was a crush, the only thing they really had in common was Quidditch and later the DA. You would really have to change and flesh out her character to make her good for Harry.

I'm looking forward to more of this story, hopefully soon.

Author's response

Thanks for reading and reviewing. It struck me as rather strange that none of the Slytherins would dare to approach the `Light' side to negotiate. If the problem is Dumbledore, the natural course would be to deal with someone like Potter. As for Daphne and Theo, they are already a `couple' and they are acting to a premeditated plan.

I intend to flesh out Cho quite a bit - she will have a rather important part to play in the whole saga.

Thanks for your opinions regarding the ship. The next chapter will be up in a few minutes.
Regards,
Maidros