Wow...this is incredible, it is one of the most intelligent and well-written Final Fantasy fanfictions that I have ever come across. The entire concept is original and refreshing, and your writing is elegant, descriptive, and professional. The atmosphere was absolutely perfect: I felt Caraway's uneasiness and fear, and his conflicting emotions at the end...somewhere between guilt, regret, and longing...it was brilliant.
Thanks very much. ^^