Review for The Heir

The Heir

(#) Cateagle 2007-01-28 10:42:00 PM

An enjoyable read, though somewhat rushed in spots; I suspect it could comfortably be expanded and fleshed out with a few more chapters, at a minimum.

I did enjoy the depiction of the "at home" Hermione and she certainly seems plausible as I could see where she'd be a bit uptight and driven in the wizarding world. An expansion and/or a sequel would be worth it if the muse strikes you.

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