Good story. I would prefer to see some well done HP/CC, as that ship is not seen very much any more, whereas HP/HG is still quite common.
Author's response
Thanks for your opinion on the ship, and the encouragement. I agree with you that Cho gets a rather raw deal; well, I will be developing her in the story, regardless of the ship.
Thanks for reading and reviewing,
Regards,
Maidros