Depending on where your story goes next, it looks like the beginning of a good original story, and I hope it will remain that way. Please make it a Harry/Cho pairing, as Harry/Hermione pairings are very common and more often than not, a bit boring. Anyway, good luck with your writings and I’m looking forward for the next (Hopefully soon) update.
Author's response
Thanks for your opinion regarding the ship, and the encouragement, and thanks for reading and reviewing.
Regards,
Maidros