First off, Possible ships - Harry/Hermione, or Harry/Cho, why not have Harry/Hermione/Cho. As I do like a good threesomes.
Other then that what a great start to the story, I like that two Slytherins has joined the DA, it shows that not all them are evil.
Author's response
Well, the only problem is I am not sure I can pull off a threesome convincingly. My romance writing skills are rather sub-par, so I would rather not experiment with a threesome at the juncture.
Yes, I agree that not all Slytherins are evil, and I intend to work on that part of the story.
Thanks for your opinions, and encouragement, and thanks for reading and reviewing.
Regards,
Maidros