Review for Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes

Harry Potter And The Corrections Of Past Mistakes

(#) Dragen 2007-01-30

What another great chapter, I do love the Ancients; Artemis, a Phoenix that had an appearance that seemed to scream royalty, Gadius, the King Basilisk of the group, Marsil, an offspring of a Royal Griffin and a Shadow Lion, Elara, the female Nundu... I like what they do for the Council of Ancients.

'No one noticed the briefly glowing eyes of both baby Harry and the Harry that had come back in time.' I don't like the sounds of that, Harry's plan's aren't going will for him.

So Michael Moon got the rings belonging to the Gryffindor and Slytherin Hairs and there vaults. I wonder why they had change though??

I have a bad feeling that something is going to happen, that will put Harry's in danger.

So please hurry and update soon. On last thing, how is Fleur going to be added in the story, if Harry is in love with Hermione??

Author's response

The eyes glowing thing... that will cause an unexpected reaction.
I didn't feel confortable letting the rings being the same after merging them. They are magical rings, so if a fusion ocurred don't you think the power would be combined also?
Fleur... don't worry, I got that covered, although you probably won't know for a while.
Thanks for the review.