This beginnig is INTENSE! This review will cover the first three chapters, so please forgive it's length.
Ch1: The battle scene was terrifyingly accurate. I have been in combat and have known the fear you find there. I can easily relate to Harry's feelings. I like his introspection. It made for a believable character.
It appears his destruction of Voldy was instinctive, rather than ingrained.
His decision to return to correct the past is likely the best, as the rest of the worrld had been devestated anyway.
Ch2; OK, So the Black Emperor is one big honkin' dragon. Nice touch. Voldy's afraid of them. Smart man!
Isn't it interesting that Harry manages to find allies in the most unusual places?
Ch3: well, Harry has once again found allies, this time in the form of the goblins at Gringotts. His invstment in the bank will almost guarantee the goblins will stand beside him.
The connction with baby Harry is an unusual oone. Sinc he's comeback physically, he can be in two placesw att once.
His preperations for the Grrqangerrs is, while ultimately selfish in nature, benificial to all.
Harry seems to have planned for eeverything, except how to protect the Longbottooms. Since he has to be there in order to fight Voldemort, and the fight will likly exhaust him if not kill him outright, perhaps he can station Mad-Eye at the Longbottom place. Of all the Aurors, he would be the one best suited to successfully handle Bella and the brothers Lestrange. Of course, if Harry survives the meeting with Voldemort, he can go to the Longbottom's home himself. It wasn't until after Voldy vanished that the psychobitch and her bookends attacked.
I have placed this on my 'alerts' list and hope to read more soon. Alorkin