(#) pazed 2006-05-11
Fun story. I like the way you are developing your Harry and his abilities. The writing is fairly ordinary but still readable and the plot kept me going. Your dialogoe is your next strongest aspect I think. Look forward to continuing. Cheers
Author's response
Odd, most people think my plot is fairly ordinary and only stick around for the writing and character interaction. It is refreshing to hear something new. Thank you for the complements and the critique.