Review for To Fight the Coming Darkness

To Fight the Coming Darkness

(#) maidros 2007-02-07 03:05:27 PM

Excellent chapter! Dumbledore's advice regarding Susan was funny, but the part about Longbottom taking out Goyle was scarily amusing.

I hope you do not my pointing out a trivial thing, but Prof. Vector is a female (arithmancy witch, Ron calls her in PoA), so the first name of Charles maybe a little off.

The chapter was exciting, and I hope to see another chapter soon.
Regards,
Maidros

Author's response

Glad you liked it chapter 30 now up. I made Vector a man in this one. Maybe at some point I'll go back and change it to Charlene or something.~Jim

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