I like the way this story is going as it goes further it just gets beter and beter. I expecally like the idea of an arranged courtship that you introduced it is something that I haven't seen in any other fic and expect to see more of when other authors who also can write good stories start to read this one and pay you the compliment of copping parts of this one into their own. Now the question is who is Harry going to pair up with? Personaly I like to see a Harry/Susan/slytherin or ravenclaw matchup with each women on equal footing as if each were hooked up with a different person and not just as one wife lord it other the other, how they get there is what would be the fun part.