(#) JBern 2006-05-13
Very good chapter. It felt mostly like a transitional chapter, but the writing quality was superior and it added to the character development. It is interesting to see how your version of Hermione is developing. I look forward to your next update.
Author's response
How odd, my response to this was posted to a chapter of a different story! Anyway, yes, purely developmental so I'm glad you liked it
"T"