(#) BenRG 2007-02-09
A fine conclusion. You chose the right place to end (for now, I hope).
Harry, by force of necessity, has grown up this summer but you didn't make the cardinal mistake of independent!Harry writers of making him too mature too quickly. He is still Harry as we know him - occasionally unaware, occassionally naieve and occasionally petulant. This characterisation of Harry is the biggest selling point of your works, I think.
Overall, a very good work.
BenRG's Overall Rating: 8/10