I can't wait for part three! ;)
It's hard to stop reading your story because it's truly amazing. Only good stories can afford to be that long, and yours definitely can afford it. (It's a subjective judgment, sure, but it should still be worth something. ;) )
Author's response
I can't wait for Part 3 either, I haven't had 5 minutes to write all weekend though. That's what I get for going to benefit shows/grammy parties. (yea my life is so tough I know...)
I'm glad you think my story is good enough to be long, thats one thing I was afraid of that people were gonna get to a point and be like "I just don't care anymore...end it already."