Yup, this chapter was fabulous! Why? Two words: Sweaty Patrick.
'Nough Said.
No really. It had the humor and drama that makes your stories spectacular like the fourth of july fire works display. Does that paint a picture? I tried. It's late and I can't see clearly, but this needed to be reviewed.
Hey, I totally miss ya girl! Smooches!
Author's response
Ha ha...
Thank you for the praise. You are much nicer than I deserve it. smoochage