Review for Chase me if you can

Chase me if you can

(#) MarkPoa 2007-02-11 10:18:26 PM

Wow. I liked this. I liked it a lot. I felt there was a lot of passion and feeling in this one that I was moved by your words. Nice work!

There are still some edits you can make in terms of spelling throughout the poem, such as approaching and awakening. A quick run through edit of this would make it less jarring to us spelling obsessed people. :P

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