Review for Gameplan
(#) falco_conlon 2005-06-17 08:07:15 AM
"Oh, absolutely." Mush paused. "Wait, I actually do. Fuck you."
Oh B. Oh my darling B. How I adore you. Your dialogue is just brilliant. It's all so easy and everything flows perfectly. I think your stories have the most realistic conversations I've ever read in fanfiction. Your transitions are done really well too. I don't really have any critisism at this point so I'll just head onto the next chapter. I'm expecting some adorable blush later on ^_^
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