Review for Swear I'll Shake it up If You Swear to Listen
Swear I'll Shake it up If You Swear to Listen
(#) rgiddles 2007-02-15 12:56:17 PM
okidoki dude... rob review special coming up!:
1./"But he was hot as fuck."/... dude.. that really sounds like summit i'd say :)
2. /"Excuse me; you should respect your elders." rotflmfaoJOKE !!!!!!!!!!!!
3. Yeah right; watching Brendon make out with Michelle is always a great laugh./ dunno y... i just have images of u saying tht... in ur head ...duz that make sense? lol
4. "I, er, sorry, fuck... didn't mean... shit... sorry," he mumbled, looking anywhere but at me, before he briskly shut the door, leaving me standing there, bewildered and also frozen still. I snapped out of it and continued getting dressed.
O. M. G.! brendon walked in on her lol coff sum ppl wish that really happens coff :)
5. brenon and ryan kissing should never be forgotten in the fic!
6. "No you didn't, did you? I don't remember you two kissing," Jon butted in. God, he can be so dumb sometimes! VIRTUAL SLAP lol that was so a CRINGE... DUHHHH moment!
7. most guys i know are really CRAP at recoverys 2 !
8. fyi.. HANNIBAL RISING... sucks and edit the well known prequel was "silence of the lambs!" if ya wanted 2 no... shud havegone with constantine 2 in 2009 loool!
9. (I was hoping there was going to be a fire or something so we didn't have to watch it) "vicky" doesnt like horror movies... hu else do i no that doesnt exactly like horror movies...???
10. aww.. brendon witht the arm around comforwt thing.. aww so sweet and subtle flirting to.. a taste of things to come???... let me guesss.. i gotta wait rite? lol
11.( yes... theres an 11!)wens mike coming? i WANT MIKEY! pleeez!!
a special ELEVEN point review ...(well technicallly the last point was a question of stupidity and impatience)BUT STILL... LOL KEEP THE UPDATE GOIN! thnk uuuuuuuuu! luvs ya jj!
rob.
1./"But he was hot as fuck."/... dude.. that really sounds like summit i'd say :)
2. /"Excuse me; you should respect your elders." rotflmfaoJOKE !!!!!!!!!!!!
3. Yeah right; watching Brendon make out with Michelle is always a great laugh./ dunno y... i just have images of u saying tht... in ur head ...duz that make sense? lol
4. "I, er, sorry, fuck... didn't mean... shit... sorry," he mumbled, looking anywhere but at me, before he briskly shut the door, leaving me standing there, bewildered and also frozen still. I snapped out of it and continued getting dressed.
O. M. G.! brendon walked in on her lol coff sum ppl wish that really happens coff :)
5. brenon and ryan kissing should never be forgotten in the fic!
6. "No you didn't, did you? I don't remember you two kissing," Jon butted in. God, he can be so dumb sometimes! VIRTUAL SLAP lol that was so a CRINGE... DUHHHH moment!
7. most guys i know are really CRAP at recoverys 2 !
8. fyi.. HANNIBAL RISING... sucks and edit the well known prequel was "silence of the lambs!" if ya wanted 2 no... shud havegone with constantine 2 in 2009 loool!
9. (I was hoping there was going to be a fire or something so we didn't have to watch it) "vicky" doesnt like horror movies... hu else do i no that doesnt exactly like horror movies...???
10. aww.. brendon witht the arm around comforwt thing.. aww so sweet and subtle flirting to.. a taste of things to come???... let me guesss.. i gotta wait rite? lol
11.( yes... theres an 11!)wens mike coming? i WANT MIKEY! pleeez!!
a special ELEVEN point review ...(well technicallly the last point was a question of stupidity and impatience)BUT STILL... LOL KEEP THE UPDATE GOIN! thnk uuuuuuuuu! luvs ya jj!
rob.
Author's response
ur reviews always make me laugh, lol. he really is, no joke, and i gues u would say that. uhuh, i thought it was funny. i would say that, cos michelles a bitch! i hav nothing against a girl he wants 2 date that is NICE though. no i REALLY dont wish that would happen, lol. too embarrassin! well, thats the last u'll hear of it, i think! it totally was, right?! o fuck, was that really the prequel?! i didnt realise! ill edit it. yeh, i wonder... twas sweet, and yes, u'll hav 2 wait. o god!!! tell EVERYONE that hes coming back, y dont u?!? u can wait. 11 points, u'll have 2 make 12 next time, lol! wow, that'l be so long. hehe, i shall look forward 2 it! when i post the next 1!!
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