Um, I LOVED it! Do you really have to ask? Actually, I loved jealous Oliver... for some reason, I love jealousy in stories. Maybe there is something wrong with me, who knows. And Patrick is adorable as usual. Anyway, Peyton needs to break up with Oliver because Patrick is... well, he's Patrick. Need I say more? Didn't think so. Have a rating point, my dear girl...
Author's response
LOL can I just say that you are like my favorite person ever! haha I love jealous Oliver, if only you could see what this kid looks like, sigh..he gives Patrick a run for his money. But Patrick is Patrick..and I just want him. I was at work today and all I kept thinking about are my characters..I think I'm going to act on those too by bringing them into the story. So thank you Gwen!