FicWad

Thank you for reading and reviewing (multiple times, please allow me to address your multiple review in this one response). Note: this is the kind of review that an author finds most useful, very specific in its criticisms. I agree, there can and should be more detail, more descriptions especially in the fun smutty parts but I have to balance rating with descriptive style, keeping the fine line below NC-17 allows for a wider readership. I will try to pay more attention to the details in the future. I remember sand hill very well, thank you, did my infantry AIT there, but took my AOCS training at beautiful Pensacola, FL; yep, Army and Navy veteran.