Review for When...


(#) Ninsaneja 2007-02-18

Needs work in terms of spelling, grammar, general form and format. Not that I don't like it, but just trying to give a pointer or two. Missing a word or misspelling a word can wreck a poem's impact and entertainment value.

Keep writing.

Author's response

Hey thanx... I understand what your saying ... and I'll keep that in mind... thank you for the review