Review for When...
Needs work in terms of spelling, grammar, general form and format. Not that I don't like it, but just trying to give a pointer or two. Missing a word or misspelling a word can wreck a poem's impact and entertainment value.
Hey thanx... I understand what your saying ... and I'll keep that in mind... thank you for the review
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