Review for Falter

Falter

(#) LiveLoud 2007-02-19

Really great chapter. I have to agree with Gwen in the 'bells' thing. You have kept that little joke going over three chapters and it fit so well.

Poor Joe needs a girl to keep him from blurting out random things and to keep him fed. He is always hungry in all his storys!

Write another chapter ASAP lady!

Author's response

Lol...is someone a Joe fan?? haha yes I loved the little bells thing too, I say that to everyone..'Don't worry I'll be there with bells on!' but I have not yet gone to the extreme that Peyton has LOL.