UTTERLY AMAZING! I love it! Great idea about Hannah picking up on Susan and Harry from the library, and really nice job on Susan's insecurities. Keep on playing those up. Keep up the superbe work!
Author's response
Glad you liked it. I'm not a big fan of those stories where Harry's mate suddenly becomes uberwitch! Susan is trying really hard and she'll get stronger, but she'll never be in Harry's league. Jim