Review for Kingdom


(#) Montag 2007-02-24

I've always loved Larxene and Marluxia stories. They're characters are so intriguing, their stories so untold.

You paint a vivid picture of their fragile dreams at the end and you don't if Marluxia is just saying that to please her or if some odd, contradictory part of him wants to tell her everything , is reaching out.

Beautiful dialouge as well. The castle line made me catch my breath. What inspired you to write it?