Yay, intricate manipulations. I think that this later chapter in your on go-ing saga (I felt like using more creative words today)is actually one of the best chapters you've put to the keyboard so far. Poor gullible Neville be-ing taken in by Grandpa Swindler.
Keep it up,
Cjon the Bloodletter
Conqueror of the Dark Realms
Author's response
Thanks for the praise. Yes, intricate manipulations is what I am aiming for - however, it is a game two (or many) can play, so there is going to be a lot of manipulation from all sides. Please do not judge Neville too early - there is a lot going on there.
Thanks for the encouragement, and thanks for reading and reviewing.
Regards,
Maidros